Characters’ faces

The lovely Helen Fennell, in a blog post which you can find here, asks other readers if they actually ‘see’ characters’ faces precisely. She says, ‘faces seem to elude me for the most part, I imagine almost the “essence” of a person rather than any great detail’. She then goes on to wonder, ‘Do authors have a very clear idea of what their characters look like? Can they create an image in their head akin to a photo?’

And then asks (in the Britishest way possible): ‘If it isn’t too impertinent a question, what do you imagine when characters from books take their place inside your head?’

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One solution: hiding faces under huge hats.

This topic chimed with me because I, like Helen, never see detailed characters’ faces when I read – nor when I write. This is all the stranger as, firstly, I’m a very visual person, an amateur doodler and an avid reader of comics, and, secondly, I ‘see’ places and surroundings in a very precise way, however little they might be described.

Unlike Helen, I’m not very easily influenced by film adaptations (though when a book is heavily illustrated, I’m influenced by the drawings), so the Harry in my head isn’t in any way Daniel Radcliffe . However, he isn’t either a very different person with precise features; his face is just a blurry ovoid thing, with glasses and a scar and a ‘shock of jet-black hair’.

harryglassesI’m very sensitive to colour in my everyday life, and mildly synaesthetic (colour/ letters, /numbers and /sounds). Some characters are patches of colour rather than faces; this seems to be triggered by the writing style and atmosphere. Characters in novels by Colette, Beauvoir, Larbaud, Nabokov ’emit’ a lot of colours for me.

In my own books, I very rarely describe main characters. There’s strictly no physical description of Sesame Seade in any of the books, for instance. For me, she wasn’t much more than a mass of hair whooshing around on purple rollerskates. When we were ‘briefing’ Sarah Horne for the illustrations, my editor called me to ask what Sesame looked like, and I didn’t really have an answer.

Yet when Sarah sent the first illustration, I immediately ‘recognised’ her.  It was ‘as I’d imagined her to look like’, yet I hadn’t imagined her to look like anything specific.

Sarah's first drawing of Sesame

Sarah’s first drawing of Sesame

French philosopher Clément Rosset talks about those moments when we think that someone looks like someone else, and then are incapable of saying who; we resort to saying ‘he’s got one of those faces’. Or when we see on screen an actor playing a character from a book, and we scream, ‘that’s not what she looks like at all!’. And yet we don’t have in our head any precise idea of ‘what she looks like’.

Or, we see for the first time the face of a radio presenter, and it can’t be them, surely not! That’s not the face we assigned to that voice. But what was that face? Not much more than a blur – but we’re adamant that it’s not that one.

This is, Rosset says, moments which evidence the ‘existence’ of invisible visions; an intimate conviction that we are referring to something (a perception, a thought, an image) when we are in fact referring to nothing at all, or not much. This ‘thinking about nothing’ is much stronger than reality, because reality is unfavourably compared to it: Daniel Radcliffe is much less Harry Potter than the not-much in my mind.

In Rosset’s view, which is connected to his wider theory of reality and its double, the invisible is eminently superior because it is ours, infinitely malleable, and always future; reality, in its visibility, is solid and boring. It is ‘the thing that we dream of when it is far, and which disappoints when it is close’ (45).

Better look at things far away than at this repulsive husband.

Better look at things far away than at this disappointing husband. (Caillebotte again)

Rosset’s explanation, though, fails to explain why I, on the other hand, immediately ‘recognised’ Sarah Horne’s Sesame, and why I do sometimes (and I’m sure many of you do too) ‘recognise’ book characters in the form of the flesh-and-blood actors, with no or very little effort.

Helen is right to say that the ‘essence’ of the person (or character) is important. I ‘recognised’ the spirit of Sesame in Sarah’s drawing, and it’s precisely because I had no vision of her – because she was ‘invisible’ or ‘not-much’ in my mind – that the image was so cosily accommodated by my imagination.

What about when characters are heavily described? I’ve noticed that I tend to skip or not take into account physical descriptions. There are ideological problems, though, with this tendency. Infamously, the character of Rue in Hunger Games was at the centre of a racist storm in recent years when it emerged that she’d been Black the whole time. This was news to many readers, who had masterfully avoided the moments in the text where this was made clear. Rue had been by default white.

We’re often asked by students and pupils ‘who we would cast’ as our book characters (presumably also because many people think that having one’s book adapted into a film would be a writer’s deepest joy, and it’s very hard to convince them otherwise). Recently I did a school visit in France for one of my teenage books, where the students had ‘cast’ famous actors and actresses in the roles of the main characters, and asked me whether I agreed. It was an interesting exercise but I didn’t feel I could help much.

ImpressionIn the book, there’s absolutely no physical description of the narrator. Her name isn’t even mentioned. The teenagers had tried to imagine what she might look like. They’d had a poll in the class, saying how many people ‘saw’ her as having ‘short hair, mid-length hair, long hair’; ‘blond hair, brown hair, black hair’; whether she was ‘short or tall’ (she was by default white). They asked me for the right answer, but of course, I didn’t know.

How attached are you to your characters?

Oh the tedium of character onanism. Character onanism, in case you didn’t know, is a verbal masturbatory practice commonly found among authors with whom you’re having coffee; authors who, in the manner of Pygmalion, have fallen in love with their own creatures and endlessly tell you everything about them.

Now the real postmodern question is, did Girodet fall in love with his own painting of Pygmalion?

Now the real postmodern question is, did Girodet fall in love with his own painting of Galatea?

These self-absorbed monologues are never, of course, triggered by your questions; if you do genuinely take an interest in the author’s characters, ask questions and contribute observations, the discussion doesn’t count as character onanism (just setting the definition here, ok).

Character onanism is most common among people who haven’t even written the damn book yet (see ‘Just Write the Damn Book’). In which case I’ve got nothing at all to say about those non-people you’ve made up. I am so bored I might start braiding my hair in a perfect reproduction of the Bayeux tapestry.

My hair, soon.

My hair, soon.

Anyway, I marvel at this kind of ‘discussion’, because I don’t quite understand what’s going on. So I’m asking here the sincere question to all authors who might be reading this (and what good taste in blogs you have!) – How attached are you to your characters?

From talking to the lovely Robin Stevens, who does not at all engage in character onanism (at least not in front of me), I gather that maybe I’m less ‘attached’ to my characters than other people. I definitely don’t ever feel like they’re ‘real’; and I don’t generally feel like they’re ‘taking over’, or whatever vocabulary I hear regularly. I’m not heartless, note – I do get extremely attached to characters in other people’s books. But mine?… well, not so much.

Part of it might be self-defence. My first ‘adult’ novel in French (as in, that I wrote as an ‘adult’ (well, 18) never sold, and I was very attached to my characters and story – I still am, and still consider it a huge failure. But for my current works – not really. If it sells, great – if not, I’m sad, but mostly because I’ve spent time on it.

I can’t help thinking – maybe people who read your book won’t particularly care about the characters; or not in the way that you want; or even dislike them. Maybe the book will do well, but the publisher won’t ask for a sequel. If you’d treated those characters as creations for a particular story for a particular book, you wouldn’t be as likely to end up feeling like your children and best friends have been publicly shamed. You wouldn’t be as likely to feel like the whole world hates you personally. You’d understand that to most people, your inner world is a source of either money or entertainment, not complete identification.

Part of it could be, also, that I see character onanism – and ‘attachment to character’ as the path towards telling everyone about one’s innermost fantasies. If you adore your characters with unending devotion, you’re probably hugely uncritical about them. You probably ‘wait’ for them to ‘dictate’ to you passionate stories where there is a love triangle and a heroine who is oddly like you and a love interest who is oddly similar in many ways to your father (or vice-versa).

And if you keep those blinkers on, it will be frankly embarrassing when the book is finished and it surfaces that you get turned-on by domestic abuse, marital rape, infant paedophilia and rough threesomes with exotic males. Especially if you’re a Mormon.

(I’m not saying you won’t make money, though.)

I believe, maybe wrongly, that the more emotionally attached you are to your characters, the more likely you are to let them ‘do whatever they want’ , let them ‘surprise you’. This vocabulary is used all the time:  ‘All of a sudden that character took control’, etc. It’s seen as evidence of the bountiful muse. To me it sounds more like inexperienced writing, but as I said, I’m willing to be attacked on this point. After all, some very good people write with no idea how their characters are going to develop, whereas I’m an obsessive plotter.

All the same, being objective towards one’s characters – treating them a bit more like narrative tools, a bit less like real humans sounds like a good idea to me.The editor who wants to get rid of a secondary character or completely modify the choices of your MC won’t be swayed by your indignant reply that it’s the way they are as people. I’ve got used, over the years, to deleting secondary characters, of significantly modifying the journey of the main character, etc. Maybe they appear to me much too malleable to be attached to them.

Anyway, I’d be curious to know what other authors around here think about this. How many of you regularly engage in character onanism? Come on, I know at least a few of you who do. Confess. How many of you honestly think, sometimes, that your characters are ‘almost real’, or whatever you call it? Are you so attached to your characters that you dream about them, ask yourself what they’d do in such and such situation, etc? How would you theorise that attachment? (that’s the academic asking…)

Clem x